2019中考英语复习资料：中考优秀作文赏析点评之（一）

优秀作文赏析点评之(一)

【习作要求】

请以Good Health为题写一篇文章。

【参考范文】

Good Health

The desire for good health is universal. Especially noadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as ell as a suessful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live fortably or ork effectively.

Ho to keep healthy, then? First, enough ti should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Send you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alhol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.

As for , I have alays been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare ti I like running, simming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.

【名师点评】

本文层次清楚，逻辑分明，第一段讲好身体的重要性，第二段讲保持身体健康的种种方法，第三段讲就“我”而言，“我”如何加强体育锻炼。本文语言地道，亮点颇多，如First… send… Finally…三个词分述三种方法;The desire for, …is universal, Especially noadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can e expect to….Ho to…then? As for , I have alays been taking care to… so, I can…等，这些短语的运用使得文章错落有致，多姿多彩。

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