英国申请文书写作，这几个雷区一定要避免开！

　　英国留学有不少值得大家学习的东西，其中关于英国留学申请中文书的写作是各位同学要重视起来的东西，文书是院校对你的第一印象，而个人陈述更是学校了解你能力和情况的一个理解，那么下面学习方法网留学就为大家介绍几个千万不要写的文书开头。

　　英国留学攻略之文书篇：如何写好个人陈述的开头

　　1、重复简历型

　　I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences ith a specialization in … in 2012 at … university, hich provided ith a profound background in atmospheric science. During this period, I received Outstanding Student Scholarship for my excellent performance in the academic field. I found that …is abstruse and interested, and there are so many things I did not understand. Thus I decided to learn more.

　　英国留学申请的文书中个人陈述中不要去重复简历上的东西，这在很多学校的PS要求中有明确提到，个人陈述的写作要具体到事件上，事件解决上，而不是单纯地重复已有的内容。

　　2、学校介绍型

　　I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China. (…… University is a prestigious university of general education ith 20 departnts and a regular annual enrollnt of 8,000 students ) I studied at ……(E. E) Departnt, ahighly selective departnt ith a gathering of smart students ho are hard to pete ith.

　　该同学的开头等于是一个申请学校的简介，这好像是在帮学校做宣传，或表达你有多了解该学校，而不是写个人陈述了。这是没有意义的开头，白白浪费了字数，最容易被秒拒掉。

　　3、抄袭句式型

　　As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since Ientered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid puter orld, I am more than greedy for sothing ne.

　　Odyssey 和more than greedy for sothing ne 这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的，很多同学有用过。但同学们要知道，老外最恨抄袭，最喜欢原创，所以利害关系大家想想吧!

　　4、救世主型

　　I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before and enjoy doing that. Since I as a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has nstantly hovered around my mind, “The orld can be changed by man&aposs endeavor, … He must ever be receptive and sensitive to the ne; and have sufficient urage and skill to novel facts and to deal ith them.” And I have been longing to be the man to face and solve novel problems.

　　一副救世主的形象，小时候就受富兰克林的影响，立志改变世界。个人陈述的写作一定要个人化、具体化，别吹牛，甚至带一种霸权主义思维。

　　5、犹抱琵琶型

　　Making a right decision at the right ti is very important for a young people .At present, I have e to a critical point in my life hen I have to make a decision ncerning my future urse of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself ill enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, revieing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in munications hich I ill pursue a lifelong career.

　　重点放在自己要做的重大决定上了，人生的转折点，然后写上几句所谓名言警句。浪费字数，有限的字数里，准备英国留学的同学们应该学会直接，并且抓住重点，突出自己最有优势的方面、最有特色的方面。

　　6、言语幼稚型

　　aposWhy the gecko can climb on the all hile e can&apost-&apos &aposWhy the leaves turn red in autumn&apos &aposHo many stars are there in the sky-&apos When I as in childhood, I alays kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in ho things ork, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle. So most of the things in my family has been takenapart by , from my father&aposs shaver to my mom&apos motorcycle. I can even fix sosimple households, listened to other people&aposs praise, to learn science ell beca my dream and felt the science ill acpany ith in my hole life.

　　一上来就回忆童年、少年时，自己有着怎样的远大抱负，谁在乎。个人陈述字数有限，却用那么多话描述童年，没有任何意义。学校想知道你如何看待未来，而不是如何度过过去。